Creative Writing
We watched the video below and wrote about what we saw. There was criteria which we needed to follow.
1. Write in 3rd Person
2. Include at least 3 details
3. Use a complex sentence.
1. Write in 3rd Person
2. Include at least 3 details
3. Use a complex sentence.
As the squirrel zips around dark eyes are watching thinking of squirrel for tea.The hawk thinks of how hard it would be to catch him but the thought of such a dinner spears him on.He puts his plan into action but the squirrel is one step ahead.
ReplyDeleteA squirrel was collecting his nuts then a eagle sees his lunch . The squirrel knows he's in trouble so he jumps the tree. He saw a dray so he climbs a bigger and higher tree. He gets to the drey he thinks he's safe from the eagle. The squirrels drey got demolished and he falls down the tree then he climbed to the drey then he is truely safe. The squirrel is lucky to live and the eagle goes home hungry
ReplyDeleteThe squirrel is going to be consumed up. Autumn leaves fall from the colossal trees as the hawk doges them bitterly.The squirrel sprints and finds a drey and suddenly crunch! as she falls out.she darts and capers in her drey the hawk trys to grab the squirrel with his talons.But the squirrel was to far in for the hawk to grab him.
ReplyDeleteThe cute little squirrel eats his acorns until a Eagle chases him through the autumn leaves then he dives across the tree tops into his Drey with the Eagle close behind. After awhile the Eagle attacks the drey, the squirrel falls out of the drey and sees his home gets deastroyed infront of him. The scared looking squirrel runs along the thin branches, until he finds a tree with a hollow. He hoped he didn't die because he had a family. Luckily he found a huge homely tree for his family. But the mother hawk had no food for her family. So she had to feed them berries, otherwise they lived happily ever after.
ReplyDeleteAs soon as the Eagle saw the squirrel he swoops down and attacks. The squirrel is freaking out. he scattered across the ground to its drey.
ReplyDeleteThe squirrel happily running through the Orange,yellow and brown autum leaves finding food then suddenly he spotted a hawk starring at his dinner.The hawk come chasing his so he runs up the tree into his drey but the hawk jumps on his drey and the squirrel falls out and runs through all the autumn leaves up the tree into the tree hole the squirrel thinks to its self I'm safe since the tree is covering me
ReplyDeleteThe leaves where falling,the sky was shaking like an eathquake as the squeal ran.He ran so that he wouldn't get demolished by that evil hawk.And thinking no not my drey as he said fling from his destroyed drey.Crak,fling as the squeal ran for its life running away from the eagle
ReplyDeleteThe leaves where falling,the sky was shaking like an eathquake as the squeal ran.He ran so that he wouldn't get demolished by that evil hawk.And thinking no not my drey as he said fling from his destroyed drey.Crak,fling as the squeal ran for its life running away from the eagle
ReplyDeleteThe squirrel drop the green leves as they tinkle on the ground.the eagle pounces off slimed tree off to eat the fury beady eyed squirrel.all the squirrel sees is branches all over the place the eagle can here the squirrel calling for help. The squirrel can see a hole in the tree he jumps in it As he can fit in it all the can see is the squirrels but sticking out.next minute is gone ang the squirrel is safe.
ReplyDeleteThe leaves are falling and the sun is bright it is Autumn and a curious squirrel runs through the mossy trees. The leaves are crunching beneath his feet. Suddenly the squirrel stops he sees a enormous hawk eyeing him greedily, slowly but steadily the hawk starts to climb down the branches of the gigantic tree trying not to get the squirrels attention but the squirrel saw him and sprinted away to climb the tree in which his drey (a drey is a squirrels home) was on top of. He jumps into it when he reaches it but the hawk jumps on the drey and the squirrel falls out. Luckily the squirrel grabs onto a branch and runs into a hole in the tree he is safe and the hawk goes without dinner THE END BY LILY
ReplyDeleteScreech as the hawk dives at the scared squirrel. Run he thinks. He runs for his life. Shadows give the ground a creepy glow. The leaves crunch loudly as he sprints. He clambers up and leaps whoosh! He dives into someones drey. Im safe the squirrel thinks. Or so he thought. Up another tree and safe. She starts scratching at the hole her talons as big as a lions claws. She flies of with no food for her baby's.
ReplyDeleteAs the Autum leavers fall a tiny squirrel runs for his life because he has heard a eagle . The big winged eagle thinks would you stop running all ready .
ReplyDeleteHis butts stuck in a small hole. "I AM ALIVE" thinks the squirrel as he wiggles in the hole.
The red leaves are falling and the sun is shining.As the squirrel runs happily runs through the beautiful leaves wile its trying to find its food. Although the squirrel does not know that theres a hawk and its looking for its food.The hawk strikes and the squirrel runs. It leaps from tree to tree to find it's drey. The hawk strikes and she's not happy. The squirrel falls and it climbs up another tree. It finds a hole in the tree and hides and thinks "yeah a new drey".
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